Black Poetry : ~Lost In Purple Haze~

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is my plea...
    I yearned for death
    and it still hasnt found
    me...
    too scared to take matters
    in my own hands.
    it's hard tryin learn the ways
    of being a man...
    everyday i wake up to my ****
    in my left hand...
    eagle spreaded, naked
    on my nut stained bed...
    Lost in purple haze
    lips and finger nails
    beginnin to decay
    and turn ebony
    by the day...
    hair nappy
    teeth turnin yella...
    19 year old junkie
    girl left me
    no ***** until I get my ****
    togetha

    today my last hope...
    came through a desperate exhale
    and went afloat...
    i burned my soul
    from inhalin poisonous
    purple dope...
    i wanna change my ways
    but when i take my step forth
    i begin to choke...
    on the air of a new life
    my past doenst want to let go...
    or is that my memory
    that spins my consciousness out of
    control...?

    Lost in Purple Haze
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....d*mn....i don't know what to say....wonderfully written...
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa...:jawdrop:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooooweeeeeeee!
    tyte scribe u laid it out here
     
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    " choke...
    on the air of a new life " " is that my memory "

    Very Nice flow.. trying to free yourself, from the strain on the brain from purple haze pain.
     
  6. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love
     
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