Black Poetry : Lost Friendship! (c) Hodee

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It hurts so much, I think of you.
    The things I didn't say.

    Lost Friendship!

    It's raining now.
    I always wanted to write about the rain.
    I have memories of mid-western rain storms...

    Well it's here.

    Unlike before it's pouring through me
    like a violent torrential river.
    It's intense metallic rage,
    has ripped apart something good.

    Resonance.. so loud,

    I don't remember this sound.
    How could I deceive you?

    The lie, the truth.

    Like the coast of Seattle days, and days of rain.
    Music rain,
    pounding rain,
    the sweetness of rain
    will be forever a memory now.

    Lost Friendship...silence was the crime.
    I need to share this with you.

    In hindsight, I Lost Friendship!
    In prescience I knew. It was stupid.
    I am sorry!
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heartfelt flow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i've been here a few tymes and
    dis was a heart felt reminder of those friendships
    tyte scribe of reality
     
  4. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to say the precious words which so many others need to speak...
    these words would make the world a better place....
    darn that pride and shame....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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