Black Poetry : Lost Factor

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    High above the sea
    In a distance
    I stand…..

    Where…

    Your love stands
    Higher then any mountain
    In full bloom
    Your my strength
    Like a summer time rose
    Cross the blue sky
    Within the ocean of love
    My one of a kind lover
    I stand in the distance

    Waiting on you


    No disillusions of a mystery
    My love is true…

    In vision,

    a black butterfly

    set free….

    Awaiting the perfect breeze
    To sail the wind

    on a star…

    Do you know?

    My one of a kind lover
    I stand in the distance

    Don’t be a pretender
    Feel my love
    Let it take over
    Don’t hide and don’t shelter
    Allow me to love you freely
    No playing with my mind
    No twisting my words

    Feel my essence

    Know the bliss melody
    That is set
    Just hold on to

    me


    Let me rescue you
    Inside my dream
    Lead you to the land of wonder
    Where roses bloom in all seasons
    And spring is alive within winter
    Cross the orbs of the galaxy
    Something that will last always

    (c) 2005
    Untitled life
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is sweet, come hither, to a place called love.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love the sweet rapture of breeze and freedom
    this piece bring my heart flow on Poetess Angel.
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Lost

    Very Lovely Write.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1Poet...you got me blushing..thanks for all the love you give....

    Rich...within the wine ita a sweet mixture indeed thanks for all the loving support

    Poetrymama...thanks for the peep in...

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'm still holding on to you tight
    getting pass the lost factor keep talking sis .
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I always say, there's two things that can't be hid...
    Fire
    &
    Love
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful my sister. :)
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ :blowkiss:


    queentswana indeed thanks for the peep inside


    ASHANTA..thanks

    Peace
    Angel
     
  10. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are welcome my sister blessings
     
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