Black Poetry : Lost and Disillusioned!

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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got your way made easy, silver spoon from day one was your reward.
    You were a chip off the old mans block
    and would never have to work to hard.
    Strong and good looking , but not really worth a dam, I am surprised to see you thinking that I am...
    Contemplating, or perpetuating a love thang with you , planning a future or babies for two.
    You still got Momma's milk on your breath.
    Don't know what it means to struggle.
    Talk about a hard time, that is you with two women you have to juggle, that's your version to the truth and you seldom see it different.
    You got your way paid, your *** laid, your misfortunes unmade and now you want to get engaged...What happens when your bubble pops...and all the freebies and the money stops?
    How do you survive heartbreak and deprivation, hard times and almost starvation...No vacation, no summer home, no second honey moons at the Plaza's in Rome.
    What kind of fantasy have your parents led you into...they have made an educated fool out of you.
    You have it in you to be so much more. But you won't even open the door.
    You owe it to yourself if to no one else.
    Like "Ziggy" say's you got to be true to your self.
    So if you think this is going to be a picnic in the park...I am afraid I have to leave you sitting here in the dark , blow out the candles and lock the door on your way out...Cause my lost and disillusioned brother I have no idea what your bougeis *** is talkin about!
    BJS(C)2003
     
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    Thanks for always reading and responding!

    I see we are having that problem again, reading not responding over and over again...I write for my passion and the book that I am building, so I move on even if no replies I am yielding...I know I can count on you!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    Well msluciousb that was an interesting piece...that male person has alot to learn and grow from...it's sumptin' to have things passed down to u and have it easy...but it's sumptin' else to have nothing and work your way up to have sumptin'.
    Hard work never hurt nobody...it builds character.
     
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    Thanks for this my sisters and brother's!

    I do so appreciate you reading and responding. This was a generalization of an observation...I believe as you Metee that hard work is good for you it builds charachter like adversity!
    Thanks y'all do come back and share with me and I will come and share with you!
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
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    so how is a keepin it real sista like you doing wit
    a silver spoon reality challenged bro like this ?
    I don't know the details but usually people of this nature
    really know the truth and are less then one generation away, but struggle hard to create an ellusion to keep reality out of focus.
    God bless them and their little house of cards.
     
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    No not me!

    A raw soja sista like me? Oh , no this is a fictitious observation of a generalization!

    Blessings In your House!
     
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    Very Nice.

    Those who have it all handed and laid out. Don't know what living is all about. They drown in support of others. Never reaching a level of self worth or support. Always doing the bidding and control of another.
     
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