Black Poetry : Lost 4 Wordz.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LURK, Dec 16, 2003.

  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    eh hmm...
    how should i tell her this....
    i dunno....anyway,here go...



    Hey love,
    today was kind of a bad day....
    i called to talk to you,
    but had nothing to say.....
    hung up on tha third ring,
    yeah-that was me....
    you see,i feel as though you lost ya love for me....
    i hear it in ya voice...
    i see it in ya eyez...
    whut we had 3 years ago was real,
    but a man could only try...
    "2 eyez with one view..
    1 heart with 2 beats.."
    thinkin' bout how we use to drop ashes on my sheets...
    smokin' that endo lah,
    with you curled up on my chest.....
    Lurk isn't a happy man,
    till Lurk gets whut he deserves best...
    and that "love" is whut Lurk wants...
    but that "pain" is whut Lurk gets...instead...
    you should know me by now...
    we have a child...so whuts next...??...
    i shoulda seen it coming,
    contemplating on whuts real between us and whuts not...
    i feel like a crippled man running,
    tryin' to conceal a hop.....
    can you feel my "want"..??...
    can you fulfill my needs..??...
    i thought this is whut a good relationship
    is supposed to be..but its not.....

    and now i'm Lost 4 Wordz........







    anothaonthaspotproduction..[email protected]....Lurkstyle.....~1~



    hey destee fam....i missed ya....been busy..but i had to release some pain
    and despair in tha air......will be back tho...onelove........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed brutha feeling ya pain in da air
    release speak let it out and keep ya
    head up and moving forward tyte drop
    of expression
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yes, feelin' the flow, bruh.

    Release all U need, you've got many minds & hearts feelin'.

    Don't stay away 2 long, brother.
     
  4. Zen Master_1

    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spoken volumes

    I hear you and yes there are days like that, sometimes we need to step back and get our thoughts and emotions in check. Then approach our mate with the kindness of heart, it sure does work wonders.
     
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    When you speak from the heart, then that's one less thing you have to worry about....
     
  6. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANX GUYZ...IT MEANZ ALOT COMIN' FROM YALL...CAUSE I RESPECT AND FEEL YA WORKIN SCRIBES ALSO........SO TRUST LURK'LL TAKE HEED....~1~
     
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    A man expressing his hurt and pain and the way he feels to the one he loves is the most beautiful thing in the world. This poem bought tears to my eyes, no joke. I loved it. Much love to you and I hope you two get back to where you need and want to be.
     
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    yes i feel it all in this nice release flow..
    nice one indeed
    Peace
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwe Lurk...

    this was so heart wrenching...
    this is the most emotively touching piece
    I've read here today...
    I felt this so deeply
    maybe because I've been there
    and there's a part of my soul
    that is always there..trapped
    in that moment...
    hanging up the phone
    without saying a word...

    ...who couldn't love my lurk :crying:
    especially when he writes like this...

    but truly...I loved this piece!
     
  10. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx true....it meanz alot.....and im also glad to hear that a woman could apreciate
    that...cause lately i've been feelin like tha women i come across
    on a day to day basis have no emotions any more...or just dont know whut they want in a man....me--well i got soo much love ta give it aint funny......

    and i apreciate ya feed too blue...thanx alot.....



    now back to tha drawing board...........!!
     
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