Black Poetry : Loss

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Apr 14, 2002.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’ve contemplated
    The loss of you
    And it hurts
    Not losing you
    But
    Losing us
    We are
    We were
    We could have been
    Great
    I know it like I know your heart
    Our spirits fit
    Together to form one
    Perfect
    Soul
    I pick up the phone
    To tell you all about my day
    My finger freezes on the last digit of your number
    Until I realize
    You don’t want my call
    I don’t matter anymore
    I want so badly to share my heart with you
    But I know
    You don’t want my heart
    My desire still runs deep
    The passion we ignited
    Burns hotter today then yesterday
    But I know you don’t want
    Me
    I lost myself months ago
    Absorbed in my need
    In my lust
    In my love
    I’ve contemplated
    The loss of you
    And it hurts
    Not losing you
    But
    Losing
    Me

    Natasha
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    The whole of this is so emotionally moving.

    But the ending REALLY did it for me!

    That is sho nuff deep and heavy!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great drop here love the flow
     
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