Quiet Poetry Lounge : LOSS OF FALSE LOVE

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    In the lost hours of yesterday
    I gazed into your eyes

    So busy
    Being in "love" with you at your worse

    We had no direction

    Without direction
    To a path
    That leads
    Somewhere

    What purpose
    Really was there for our union

    None whatsoever

    But

    The manifestation
    of wasted time

    The seclusion
    and illusion

    That we would somehow
    Be
    All right together

    Finally,

    Dissolved into
    the realization
    That
    I got s*** to do

    Love exists
    When two are
    Looking in the same direction

    Just gazing into
    Each other's eyes

    Made us forget
    What
    Was going on all around us

    And therefore,

    Left us
    Together
    Doomed to fail.
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Miss Lady
    You right
    It takes two.
    Sometimes we take our love
    and hope it would strong enough
    to carry there load to. But it don't work that way
    Time is short, life is shorter. Yet the right
    love is a life time that goes beyond forever.
    Very nice scribe sis

    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    more so then any we seem to forget what we doing and why we there
    once the glist of eyes meet one try to bring it to realism when it's a false notion
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If two aren't goiong in the same direction, eventually, one will move beyond the other, and lose interest. Better to figure it out now, than to regret it later. On point piece.
     
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