Black Poetry : Losing my Grip

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by gayluv, Oct 9, 2003.

  1. gayluv

    gayluv Active Member MEMBER

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    No way to tell
    which way is up
    or down for that matter
    Beauty fell to my eyes
    like raindrops
    to help me understand
    just why
    I'm losin my grip
    grip of my mind
    grip of my world
    grip of my girl
    my understanding
    slipped
    fell
    and
    drowned off my axis
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    spin around and get back up again
    in the smooth flow i like dis
    nice write
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
     
  4. gayluv

    gayluv Active Member MEMBER

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    TTTTTTTHHHHHHAAAAAAANNNNNNKKKKKK YYYYYYOOOOOUUUUU!
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah I like this.
     
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