Black Poetry : Losing IT

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by misty, Jul 15, 2002.

  1. misty

    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm losing it .. CONTROL
    MS. IN-CONTROL all the time
    my heart beats fast at the thought of you
    so many feelings and thoughts running
    through my mind
    always in control of my feelings
    not letting them show
    waiting to see how he feels first
    I think he feels the same
    I hope so
    don't know how long
    I can remain in control
    my heart is making
    me lose control.


    :heart: ;)
     
  2. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Control is good in this instance- to lose control here often leads to decisions not well taken. Keep control here.

    JAH Love.
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waiting for signs to tell
    he feels the same way
    before you reveal
    your true emotions.
    Wondering if waiting too long
    will be too late.

    I'm feelin' this piece.


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  4. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya gurl. I been deah. Control is everything in times like these. Let him lose it first, then git yo self lost in him. :)

    Enjoy the reading of this poem,

    Joyce
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes you just have to.......

    lose control...It's liberating

    Free to be me
    Natasha
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    mmmm
    how could anybody be mad at cha?

    get yours poet
    feeling the "vapors"

    DSS
     
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    Feeling this poet
    Love your flow
    Keep control sista
    He will feel the same
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling the flow flow on poet.
     
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