Black Poetry : LORD, I'M NOT REALLY HERE

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  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LORD I’M NOT REALLY HERE


    My smile is rejected
    My image reflects greed
    My soul is torn like moth eaten clothes never worn
    My tears run over
    My body is tired from turning over in my sleep

    Lord I’m not really here

    I believe I was not made for this world
    I feel like nothing good will ever happen for me
    I died the moment I tried to reach out to so many

    My feet are stained from the blood of my heart
    My soul has been snatched
    I can no longer run with the evidence of unhappiness
    My presence wasn’t smart
    A misused heart

    I’ve never asked for anything
    But, tonight I need you to show me a light to my destiny
    The path where good spirits roam free
    Where love is a necessity

    Lord, if you can’t give me a sign
    And my prayer was too small to complete,
    I was never here lord
    So please!, please set me free
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let not thy heart be troubled
    believeth and look to the hills
    for there is true love , warmth
    and your fate that i am !!!

    felt all this scribe in my soul...
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Thank you Rich!:kiss1:
    Through the eyes reads your soul:kiss1:
     
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    this was deep sister please continue to flow on .
     
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    The Lord shows us
    The true meaning of love
    No matter what the situation
    Nice Flow Poet
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the constant love Rich,nevar and Tantrum
     
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    What this brings to mind is a pain so harsh that it makes us feel numb, and we're pleading for the Lord to help. Thank goodness he answers prayer. I really felt this poet.
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Thank you watzinaname:kiss1:
     
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    Sometimes we walk in nivisible shrouds
    That beget the mask we wear
    asking strangers if they know us
    trying to find our way home
    when birds have eaten our crumbs
    Lord God of all
    Unveil us and let us hear
    The most pleasant words of all
    Come

    "That was a brave piece to write"

    Peace
    Patrice
     
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    Just ask, and you shall recieve...
    for surely death is all you ever wanted...that's all you ever got.
    Direct your wants, to fit your needs...and it's yours for the asking.
    deep piece poet
     
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