Black Poetry : Lord Have Mercy

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  1. ephlat

    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have mercy on me
    This man is blessed
    HIs anionting crowns the top of his head
    And ends at his feet
    His long dark dreads remind me of the barks of ebony
    The almond skin sccents the coffee in his eyes
    Ans as I gazr at him I see he has nothing to hide
    His full lips, moist with the juices of his tongue appear to be peaches
    The juices won't stop flowing
    Lord have mercy!
    Look at his body
    It should be a sin
    With a body of a god kissed by the sun he is flawless
    The rows of cornfields that strip his stomach can cause hunger for days
    HIs hands are that of a warrior but gentle like a lover
    HAnds like no other
    His...nevermind...
    HIs legs are strong
    Masculine
    Have mercy
    I wanna touch him
    But I might hurt him
    The harshness of my love could tarnish him with a kiss
    The intensity of my passion could drive him nuts
    So I just look
    Lord have mercy
    He's looking back at me!
     
  2. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gurl, You are on a roll. This is very Nice. :laugh:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww that was so sweet, it was a beautiful flow, and when you got to the end, I had to smile. I enjoyed this one high props sis
     
  4. ephlat

    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot. glad you enjoyed
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop here ............
     
  6. ephlat

    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks you guys for reading
     
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