Black Poetry : Lop sided

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    down a street
    of two way highway
    lop sided vote
    cast in a ballot
    where new foil begin
    and the old forgotten

    lop sided cast
    see not da depth
    see not the vision
    judge by da book
    eyes still hook
    emotions fade
    in a blissful blaze
    down the road
    slim & slim

    so cast not one vote forth da Victory already won !

    LOP SIDED
    myth of pleasure
    no bread to break
    fish spoil
    cassarole undone
    where's da fun
    where's da joy
    seem to vanish into da lop sided vote
    dis no joke going 4 broken words
    yet da hush is lay at bay
    dead
    so now i stand in my lonely corner watching ....:eek:
     
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    Queen_of_Spades Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This definitely took my brain on a trip...you must didn't see me standing at the corner watching, too, huh Rich? That's okay...I know you were too absorbed in your own thoughts. :eek:)

    Deeply conveyed, nicely written.
     
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    He ain't heavy...."He is my brother!"

    You speak of truths that minds can't fathom.
    Rationalize the irrational.
    And fashion the unfashionable...
    I missed you my brother...keep Hope alive, we will
    survive! They may have the votes...but God 's got
    the Power!
    Blessings on ya House...keep feeding our minds and our souls!
    Love ya B:kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Queen be not confused forth the turn i made was into ya eyes
    i see u watching from afar just stay close .....

    my sis B... gurl missing ain't da word
    hell u know da luv in vibe is strong
    i got my head up high and my boggie shoes on !
     
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