Black Poetry : Loosing Control (It gets a little Hot and Steamy)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by gayluv, Aug 13, 2003.

  1. gayluv

    gayluv Active Member MEMBER

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    Unrhymthic thoughts of your fingers,
    overindulged in my cherry sweetness,
    my very wetness,
    embraces your face,
    feel the rhythm our hearts beat to another pace.
    Visions of taste,
    Chocolate melt,
    Sunday split,
    Hot but icy cold,
    Only till explosions mold,
    A scream of my orgasmic pleasure,
    treasure
    it!
    Let the sheets become the pen and paper,
    As you write the pattern to my poetic poetic thoughts,
    Walls covered,
    in our Hershey Love.

    Faint words spoken in the wind,
    heard between my gasps of release,
    and your begs for impowerment,
    Total domination,
    Your concentration,
    STRONG,
    Long, long, long loving.
    Honey drips down my leg,
    Not escaping your tongue,
    as you taste the forbidden,
    and bring out the hidden,
    freak inside.

    It gets hotter as
    you slip into
    my jungle love
    pull, grab, hold on
    for it only gets wilder
    hotter like summer heat
    but never mind the heat
    cuz pleasure overwhelmes my mind
    as you caress each and every inch
    crack and cravess
    love to love it,
    me
    while I love you
    love the things you do
    love the fashion
    that passion
    is displayed for the readable expression
    that led to our 2nd session
    of our mad love confessions
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very deep flow feeling your vibe here
    keep the ink flowin'
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] sis yo sho aint nothin back lol :)
    go on wit ya bold self lol :)
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U said it gets a little hot and steamy.
    U know like I know that's an understatement.
    My fingers are getting all sweaty on the keyboard
    U really took me there
    Top notch scribe
    I gotta add this 2 my favorites list.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop::hot:...CAUTION: this poem may cause headaches and or result in pregnancy
     
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