Black Poetry : Looking into my eyes

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  1. Uniqua

    Uniqua New Member MEMBER

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    Looking into my eyes
    What will you see? What will you find?
    When your finished looking will I want to run and hide?
    Or could it be you'll find love and I'll want to stay by your side?
    Can you see all the hurt and pain that I've been through?
    Or are they hidden by the joys and liveliness that I've found in you?
    Will you be frighten off by my past?
    Or will you mend things together and make it last?

    Looking into my eyes
    What will you find? What will you see?
    Are these truly the eyes of your wife to be?
    Or am I just a fraud?
    When your finished looking will you feel as if you've been robbed?
    Are these the eyes you want to look at for the rest of your life?
    To have and to hold, Through misery and strife
    Will these eyes live up to all your dreams and destinys?
    Are these eyes really what they appear to be?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome !!

    welcome to destee's poetic playground of love
    welcome from the one above into ya eyez
    a glaze of hope from dis flow i see the light
    welcome ! from da man in flyteeeeeeee!!!:)
    dis be tyteeeeeeee! flow on Uniqua.............
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:

    stop in our live poetry open mic here on destee
    at www.************ we be flowin 24/7 live
    music & friendly chats even our very own radio station live
    come share join me & others love to hear u speak....:D
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow!
    feels like the love
    he should see!
    Peace to ya!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uniqua,

    Welcome... Here, these eyes implore you to write forever more!

    1poetsought ~
     
  5. Uniqua

    Uniqua New Member MEMBER

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    Thanks For Reading and all the Replys!!
    I' m loving it here!!
     
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    as we are lovin u here
    continue upon us all
    u family now
    Thank u for u
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eyes=unknown

    eyes,
    are very desivin'.
    but u can get folks,
    belivin'.
    that what u say,
    is true.
    i respect what u put,
    by writing the way u do.
    i really felt this one,
    it's at the top of my list.
    cuz u know most folks,
    can't write like this.
    eyes were a good topic,
    bcuz we all fall 4 them sometimes.
    watch out for the men though,
    they sometimes can get u hypmotized......:x:
     
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    Very nice poem! flows well
     
  9. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like your flow... real nice

    peace
     
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