Black Poetry : looking for someone to finish this

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticwords, Jun 5, 2003.

  1. poeticwords

    poeticwords Member MEMBER

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    As I walked home from school yesterday
    I looked to my left and saw trees and flowers begging to bloom
    but as turned right i saw a graveyard full of people who've passed
    and I began to ask myself
    If ever second of everyday someone dies
    an if everytime someone dies somewhere close by a baby cries
    I wonder if that child who took your number would kinda have
    a part of you
    Or at least a part of what you used to be
    maybe this makes sense
    maybe its just me
    But i do wonder about afterlife
    and how thats going to be
    :confused:
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    That do make me Wonder. Hmmmm!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    after LIFE
    is that the right of your
    situation
    does your relationship
    with the world rests
    with your continued BEING
    even if not SEEN
    i wonder
    when Jesus said
    "death is liken unto a deep sleep"
    did He mean until another's birth
    or would you rest
    'til GOD told you to wake
    for HIS day...

    (of judgment)

    i say what i say
    that's just the way
    i view things
    it doesn't mean
    i know more than you
    OR...i'm right in my view
    it's just who i am
    and my interpretation of GOD's Word.

    that's just me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    death bring forth life as life interpretation of someone
    afterlife is cast unto judgement day forth that day
    shall be one whom so live in the world under GOD
    shall not parish but have eternal life .....
    one not question the Fathers direction
    but so loveth in he and life is seen in a vision
    when a baby weep forth come death as to
    death forth come life in rejoice.....

    i'm not saying i'm right but by the life i live
    and the love of GOD i vision the path of eternal life
    set for me it's for me to get their
    from the word of GOD it's beautiful
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmmm I'll get back to you on that promise
     
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