Black Poetry : Looking for Ms. Eggstatic

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  1. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Look how much time was wasted
    Looking for the incredible-edible Egg.
    Figure I don't need no mo deviled eggs
    All I really want is a woman who's egg-static
    Don't really care if she's hard-boiled
    As long as she's soft on the inside
    Her teeth ain't gotta be egg whites
    She ain't even gotta lift a nail or come out of her shell
    All I want is someone who's ready and willing to let me hold her.
    Let me be her incubator so I can finally get to now her
    For the chick she truly is.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a witty piece. The last line just brought it all home. Much enjoyed!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice write enjoyed this much
    keep flowing poet !
     
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