Black Poetry : Looking at Dnommo.........

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  1. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking out
    or rather in
    im still amazed
    at the thought of you
    and your many dimensions

    Beauty beyond measure
    depths incomprehensible

    The way you make love to me...
    with your poetry
    satisfying this insatiable hunger
    for an even exchange
    meeting me and then some
    renders me
    speechless...

    Sitting on the other side of the world
    i see
    the man that caught me
    held me
    covered me
    filled in the gaps

    I feel….
    the eyes of his soul

    Experiencing….
    my reason for believing

    Corinthians Manifested

    Dnommo, I am looking at you……

    Thank you for giving me back my smile……
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sisssss... This is Love!!!

    8th...

    this is an oh-so sweet tribute!!

    hey!?!... does D know how lucky he is?? :)

    Always&4EvaPeace...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    Ok,now I don't feel as bad because I was trying to let dnommo respond to this one. But since GA_Sunshyne did already I am free to say how beautiful this piece is. I'm feelin this...
    Desert Storm
     
  4. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA

    Thanks sis, ya know what?
    I really do think he knows...


    Storm,

    Thanks sis, ya know, if i could just share with you what this man means to me, what he is beginning to mean to my life, you would just....cry... Definetely God sent...

    8th!
     
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    now THIS

    is beauty!

    woooooooooooooohhh!

    g'on now y'all....

    :love:

    A
     
  6. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    Thank you so much sista for your kind words.. Deeply felt..

    8th!
     
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    Yall betta handle yall bizness!!!!
     
  8. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

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    8th from the depths of my soul because i know you
    i feel this
    love you girl
    PEACE&1LUV
     
  9. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's right boo....
    (smiling)
     
  10. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pztvnrg,

    And because I KNOW you see me, unlike many
    Ya got the flood gate opening...

    8th!
     
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