Black Poetry : Lookin Out The Window!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking out the window
    the sun shines upon
    my face
    the calendar before me
    my heart begins
    to race
    seven short days
    remaining
    sustaining
    containing
    rearraning
    engaging
    interchanging

    Looking out the window
    on a cold but
    sunny day
    hear the children's laughter
    watch the children play
    engaging
    remaining
    sustaining
    rearranging
    interchanging
    containing

    Looking out the window
    I see heaven in my midst
    of simple things
    birds that sing
    sun that shines
    hearts that beat
    the childrens feet
    oh so sweet.
    And in seven days
    It will be even sweeter!:heart: BJS(c)
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm sure there's a significance to the seven day reference...

    still, i'll sit by the window with you
    contemplating
    anticipating
    what is to be
    i see what you see
    but the excitement
    is far removed from me

    i see
    children playing
    in the afternoon sunlight
    as nightfall slowly falls their way
    they continue to play
    'til mommie yells

    it's time to come in

    still,
    they play

    then
    along the sidewalk
    among the throng of children playing
    in line with the blinding sun rays
    neatly groomed and GQ dressed

    he stood.

    SEVEN DAYS CAME FAST THIS WEEK.:)

    enjoy your treat.
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhhhhh! I'll never tellll!

    Yes my dear scribe you do feel my vibe.
    Thanks for the poem it was off the hook
    We should work on a collab, thanks homie!:D
     
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    Mz LB......

    Isn't it a wonderful feeling, when you can enjoy
    the significant beauty of the things around you,
    when inspired by someone special.....I like this.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR GOING WITH THE FLOW!

    THANKS FOR GOING WITH THE FLOW, I SEE THE MUSE IS
    PRESENTLY RESIDING WITH YOU ALSO! FROM THE THOUGHT
    TO THE PAGE......ENGAGE!!!!!!!! PEACE AND PROSPERITY AND MOST OF ALL TO:love:
     
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