Black Poetry : Look into my eyes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Dec 8, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Look into my eyes my Nubian Sister. Let me know the truth. As I rub my eyes to focus. I like it when you smile. I’m not afraid. This is the trip of a life time and I have taken this journey before. I think the bad part of this trip has always been. You are the keeper of the flame. I know you can turn off the vision and love. That frustrates me, doesn't break me. Yet sometimes you won't allow your man to see. Open up those beautiful Browns for me. I wish tonight that this never ends. I am totally. Focused on the depth of you.

    I look deep. I see the ancestors of my people calling deep from within you. Only you are able to give birth to a woman or man. So you are the keeper of the flame and deserve all of my protection.

    I love you because the vision is there. It isn't in my eye. I have limited vision. A mans limited course. Oh it's enough for me to get a lot done. But I’m talking about a job, and level I can't obtain without you. Let me look again. I can tell you the truth from what you conjure up in me. I shall never leave you behind. Once I find that vision. My search is over.. I give up that search when I met you. If I share that with you would that scare you?

    Looking at the vision in the eye of the lady in my life

    While you’re in my life everyday, I pledge to myself, that I will take all of the treasure you offer and sprinkle it at your feet. I know how to calm, your fears.... telling you all the time enjoy the ride. Cause I am focused on you my treasure.
     
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    this was wonderful
    i was captured in the flow
    i likes
    flow on..:angel1:
     
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    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Did an excellent job

    HODEE, Speaking from the heart takes on a whole different meaning this should be a Masterpiece and a great example for all us men to follow, thanks for the insight.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was felt and da true essence roll out from da heart
    ya pen is well and doing it right flow on sir ....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a beautiful collection of precious thoughts.
     
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    HODEE...this was so awesome...
    with such mysticism in the way you
    describe the power she has...
    the treasure she holds within
    her.....I love the way you flowed with this!
     
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    my goodness
    much love and respect on this drop
    my brother
    Peace
     
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