Black Poetry : Look Deeper !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    She was tender and divine
    but lack a sho of sign
    her heart beats sweetly
    and a soul of charm
    but many still hold this alarm
    some know her like a field
    of forever daisies
    but to me she became that
    gentle today rose
    Godly harmony of wishies
    yet someday of hope
    dressed in the scarlet strand
    blue wisp and barb a vibrant
    color shaded tone sprinkle bright
    as the wind blow a mixture

    Nothing compare to this rose
    a beautiful blooming creation
    she held belove at heart & soul
    sharing self upon the fields
    exposed to the night of doubts
    yet pay the price to be
    like frozen sap hanging enhancing
    GOD'S love reflecting a crisp sign
    or warmth within out spraying joy
    i whisper upon the spool of hope
    and togetherness as i see deeper
    the core of a beautiful rose
    can't u see her colors so pretty
    and so devoted to the steam
    every piece of this flower becomes
    more divine if you just look deeper
    if you just feel the warmth and
    touch her inner being she come alive
    happier and joyful in day light and
    smile at night as we sleep
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a warm feeling I get from this, as I imagine the delicate hues appearing even more beautiful upon closer inspection of each petal. Yes, looking deeper can reveal so much more. Enjoyed and felt this lovely piece brotha.
     
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    thank you so much and that is true looking
    deeper you can a beauty & warmth far beyond
    what one think ......thankz watz
     
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    re:Deep

    Rich, this is an excellent poem. :dance1:
     
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    thank you sista poetrymama i was just expression
    the beauty when one look deeper ....
     
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    this was dreamy like a breathe of fresh air i really enjoyed the mood it set....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    thank you Angel when u go deeper u see what can't be seen the beauty
     
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