Black Poetry : Look Back Into our Future

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by spicybrown, Nov 20, 2005.

  1. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reaching back in time to the day I first met you,

    stepped to me with a smooth line, how could I ever forget you?,

    never once crossed my mind to settle down, and make things official,

    till I gazed into your sultry green eyes teary-eyed, now i'm with you,

    remember summer of 01 at the recreation/waterpark,

    my ponytail fell off in the 10' pool:swim: you went and retrieved it.........awww,

    what's hella funny is when we ditched Red Lobster:peace: with a $200 bill,

    those crazy things in our early twenties were such a friggin' thrill,

    5 years of bliss, from our first :smooch: , to cussing out in public,

    this ghetto-love can never be replaced, nope, i'd never dream of it,

    floating through the park, while walking we look like the number "18",

    "1" for our love, "8" for infinity, others try, but can't compete with this team,

    So now we've grown together, you even helped raise my daughter,

    the toughest times, you were right there, that's why there is no other,

    make a long poem short, still madd in love, this you should already know,

    anticipating the day you slip that ring, and make me Mrs. Cano




    :hearts1: :luvu: :spinstar: :spinstar::hearts2: :spinstar: :spinstar: :luvu: :hearts1:
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like a trip down the isle to me...Its all love. He will indeed reap a Treasure...I like your flow of love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhh! feeling the depth roll sweetly as Gold
     
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    Awesome poem Spicey
    You are hitting with made love
    I know he appreciates this one
     
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    Hi spicybrown
    Oh..lol:)
    I love how you reflect
    those time in your life in this awesome poem
    I was smiling and laughing
    you really touch on so wonderful
    human emotions of just being..
    with the one who has
    your heart singing
    rolling with the ups and downs :)
    Very tyte :)

    Peace
     
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    me and you need to discuss how to ditch the bill for 200 naw just kidding. nice dedication to your man. flow on.
     
  7. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girlllllll, strategy!!!! Na, wouldn't suggest it unless you can run fast, or don't mind dishpan hands! :court: :juggle:
     
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    I enjoyed the look back at those madcap times, we all have our ups and downs but when you truly love someone, you just keep coming back to each other. Flow on poet of the week.
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this was so real poet
    they need to realize what they have stop playing
    and get that ring man

    stop playing

    DSS
     
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