Black Poetry : Look At Yourself

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  1. Ujima

    Ujima Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You think that everyone else needs some professional mental help, while in all of actuality you are really talking about yourself. Why do you try to place the blame of your life’s mishaps on the lives of the innocent? Look into your life’s mirror and embrace the reflection and release your guilt for it will never again become reminiscent. Your “judge-mentality” is pushing you farther and farther away from this world’s reality. Maybe you just cannot handle the truth and the spiritual realm that surrounds you. Time is running out and when it comes to an end, tell me, what will you do? That is what is wrong with the world today. The world is truthless. So many souls dying needlessly and lost souls are becoming rambunctiously ruthless. Talking about one another, mistreating your sisters and brothers…it ain’t right. But you want the troubles of the world to make room for you and all of your pitiful plights. Look at yourself. What makes you think that you are greater than me? Ignorance has taken over your sight and made you blind and you can no longer see. Love yourself even if no one else but God ever does. Because sooner comes before later and you will someday wish that what has been written into your life as a negative stronghold never was.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    layin it out on da line
    flow on i hear ya
     
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    this was str8 to da point
    nice drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gotta check that mirror to check yourself, this was tyte.
     
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    this was a really good piece..

    very real..its the kinda thing that alot of people think about but dont write about......i love the subject myself and write about it all the time..in order to find oneself u have to look for yourself....

    :flamet:
     
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    Very nice.
     
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