Black Poetry : Look At Me !

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jul 2, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Look at me now I'm as simple as I am.
    All complexitys have faded with time. I'm
    thinking for myself. Look into my eyes.
    See my heart, listen to my mind.
    I'm reaching out to you. Come close.
    I'm extended to my limit. Touch me now
    meet me.. me half the way.

    (c) HODEE...
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like your writing style....good piece...