Black Poetry : Look Across

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dstny, Jun 23, 2004.

  1. dstny

    dstny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Look Across
    The palm of God's great hand
    And see the peace
    That underlies the pain.
    No tragic loss
    Or grief can be so grand
    Through life's short lease
    Such sights our hearts sustain.
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dstny you must be by far the....................i can't name it, it's like you're....you're....gosh..........i'm speechless..........just speechless......keep flowin.............man.........keep flowin......... :toast:
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dstny,
    wise verse
    for seers and believers
    the purpose of all is ultimate good
    victory over defeat
    peace over chaos
    joy over sorrow
    life over death etc.
    in the Creator's Master Plan
    Great Great Hand
    on across.....
    i enjoyed this writing......

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked the way you wrote about God's grace and ease...very nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice flow dis was u really drop dis one
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *Applause*

    Absolutely Beautiful in all of its Divinity...​
     
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