Quiet Poetry Lounge : Lonliest Night of the Week

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Jul 7, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Today I've got a busy agenda
    Tonight I'm without any ideas
    about what I'm planning to do
    Wanting to be needed

    -- TO BE LOVED BY YOU --

    During the course
    of the other 6 days
    of the week
    my time is occupied
    with work
    ..................work
    work
    and .........more work
    - maybe even a little
    fun in between

    Oh but, there is one
    day that seems so lonely
    to me
    It passes by so slowly
    and night time - is even slower
    ... all I can do is
    eat ~ sleep ~ think ~
    sleep ~ think ~ eat ~
    A L O N E
    to fill in the whole
    of not having my guy
    here with me to hold

    Another "Sad"urday Night.

    Just to be with you
    on a clear sky "Sad"urday
    or a hot and steamy "Sad"urday
    and even a torrential rainstorm
    "Sad"urday ...

    whatever the weather --
    it never mattered much
    to me ...
    Just the happy memories

    -- TO BE LOVED BY YOU --

    and it reminds me of why
    "Sad"urday is ~
    the lonliest night of the week




    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ggggurl.... this makes me wanna testifyl!

    i've had to go thru a few of those "Sad"urdays
    my **** self. you scribed it perfectly! (but you
    do that constantly)... thanks for sharing!! :)

    One.
    Ga~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I TRUELY FEEL YA HERE
    I'VE BEEN ON DAYZ LIKE
    THIS MYSELF.......WELL I
    JUST WRITE ....BUT NEED
    TO BE LOVED BY U!!!!
    THIS LINE SPEAKS FOR ITS SELF....:heart:
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice, dear poetess. i can relate, mos def.

    ~~~expressedlove~~~
     
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    I know it all too well...

    those lonely boring "Sad"urday Nights. But then again...with or without him...Every now and again you'll have those lonely nights...

    Tight Scribe..but then again you always handle yours...;)
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA

    Yea sistah... this poem speaks volumes to me ~ on many occasions I get the "Sad"urday Night Fever ... and it makes me sick! :lol:

    Thank you doll!

    One.
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    I see that you too can relate to this piece my brotha!
    So glad you enjoyed the read!

    One.
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    List~

    Hey gurlie ~ thank you much!
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Neak Neak~

    You feel me too! Yes, this is so universal that I think no matter what ~ it's something that folks can relate to in some form or fashion.

    Thank you mami for the read!

    One.
     
  10. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, yeah , yeah!

    Them "Sad" urday's can be something else! But so glad to know that "Some" day is soon to follow ;)
    Nice Flow!
    Jyntl
     
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