Black Poetry : Longing

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  1. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LONGING

    You move me.
    I say move and not moved because you’re still in my heart.
    My mind tries to leave you behind
    But my heart won’t walk away.

    You touched me.
    Gentle tongue, warm breath on my back, kisses on my face-
    The thought alone make me breathless.
    Just touch me once more today.

    You called me,
    And your voice like no other so sweetly said my name.
    A chill cascaded down my spine
    At the things you used to say.

    You loved me.
    That’s long gone, but I can’t stop myself from loving you.
    Now I smile when you call at all.
    Will my heart leave you today?

    -Briana
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da answer is within da heart !!!
    nice vibe poet!
     
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    WHOA

    THAT WAS SMOOTH AND PROFOUND. GREAT FLOW.
     
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    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you both very much. You brought a smile yo my face.
     
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