Quiet Poetry Lounge : Longing for that Place....

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take me Home....
    to Youre Heart....
    take me Home my Lord..
    Take me Home to that World...
    take my Hand my Lord...


    Take me home .....
    to Youre Love.....
    Take me Home...

    just take me home....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very deep scribe forth he so will hold u
    when home time come .....take me home LORD !
    tyte
     
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    ahhh
    very nice
    much love to you
    Peace
     
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    i like this
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooooooooooooooooooh! I like this!

    Just don't go anywhere soon, just getting to enjoy your work....:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed our poet of da week !!!!
    beautiful scribe
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes thanks Rich..:heart:

    I had clear dreams about things that are going to happen in the future...

    and i seth my hopes on him...

    i hope he comes soon...

    cause to be honest ...he promised that he would wipe our tears away..

    and i want him to do that... (cause i think my eyes maybe fall out of the tears one of these days)

    cause i dont like the way how it is write now...

    and i cant change the way my Flesh heart is.....(god knows i cant)

    i mean he made it....

    and he askes me to keep it that way....not to turnit into sumthing hard (its there in the bibel)

    but i understand why people get that way....to not feel the hurt.......

    eather i become that way Hard.........or i get sick of the swollowing heart Punches..


    and i cant change people....and i dont want them to change...

    only god changes...




    Love :heart: liberty
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed sistah u really hit it on the head
    only he so change thee
     
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    U have penned a brief and powerful expression for reaching the home of peace (Dar Es-Salaam) i enjoyed the read.

    Peace and Blessings
     
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