Black Poetry : Long: Time Lost

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, May 23, 2007.

  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i know this so well , like reading my life story of lost time
    as i reflect on the past of what was and what was yet to be seen
     
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    You're in a lot of people's heads. I wonder if this life is indeed what it's supposed to be, and if so, why? What did I do, or not do, to cause this chain of events. Anywho, feeling this intense flow.
     
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    well done bed stuyvesant, the livest one. your words take me back to high school and into college where I dropout and still drop knowledge. i got peops from williams ave. in bk and we made a few songs together. his name is anthony (he calls hisself ant banx). w/b
     
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    i agree w sister Watzinaname, this 1 hit home w me :toast:

    lookin 4ward 2 hearin this 1 on the mic somtime (please)
     
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    thanks poets

    $$RICH$$ - man you ain't lyin' i know you know what it is thanks for the love man

    watzinaname - in your head? is that good or bad? lol hahaha
    but thank you it's just how i felt and it came out i can't make this stuff up
    it flows from the heavens

    Sha'iyn - the livest one representin' BK to the fullest them things i pulled it
    hahahahahahhah peace soldier 4real oh you got people in ENY ok ok
    i'd like to hear the tracks at some point, thanx for feelin' me

    Alkebulan - thanx for feelin' me and you might get your wish.......at some point lol peace

    yes this looks like i'm depressed oh no, although at times you do have down swings, it's all part of nature, up and down, but i'm not defeated

    i appreciate my life what i have, you know it could be "worser" hahahahaha

    yes i see my moms turning over in her grave ok ok it could be worse hahhahaa

    so my last line was "Or is there more you want me to see?"

    and i believe there's more for me to see

    peace poets thanx
     
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    You modulate space and time in this spectacular, verbal piece, FlowOn!
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    thank you mister 1


    for seeing the symmetry

    peace
     
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