Black Poetry : long time coming

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  1. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i waited and searched
    been faithful and went to church
    like the red bird upon her tree i sat and pirched
    long is the wait and hard was the search

    long time coming ......

    many burdens i would bare
    caught in life's snags and snares
    still i knew u were out there
    and secrets of our heart we'd share
    i need to find and this feeling would be ever so rare
    the special way in which u would care
    we'd be the PERFECT pair

    long time coming .....

    i feel u in the summers rain
    in rivers of your love i'd drinch my self to be drain ....
    into completeness, oneness with u
    unable to distinguish the two
    we'd be one less than few
    no longer me just u

    long time coming .....

    in the distance i hear u humming
    yearning the day of my coming
    exasperated feeble with weary i cease running
    in the distance i hear u humming
    the toon that intricately intertwines the depths of my mind
    draw out the love that dwell in the wells of my soul
    u would partake of me slowly quenching a thirst that has linquired for years
    healing the wounds cause by shears u cease my fears
    such a completeness you'd would make me whole
    for u are the rest of my soul.....

    long time coming ......

    i was sure in the end it would be worth it all
    head over hills we'd fall
    never expected there would be this wall
    long dark trenches never ending, winding hall
    faintly we'd hear each others call
    all of u or not at all

    long time coming .....

    i pray that u find the strength
    and understand love is not all a myth
    inspite of it all we could have what we wish
    in my prayers i pray that we have eternal bliss
    soon i become your MRS.
    this would be my wish ..... sealed with a sweet kiss

    long time coming
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da day of long lost love
    now upon da grasp of ya touch
    it's been far too long yet
    tyme is right 4 dis long tyme coming !
     
  3. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ya RICH i can always count on u, and it has been a long tyme coming yet i feel strong da tyme is nearing
     
  4. wildflower7

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    this piece was pretty heavy...
    didn't expect that ending (cliffhanger)
    i enjoyed it very much! -7:spinstar:
     
  5. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WILDFLOWER THAT IS USUALLY HOW LIFE GOES UNEXPECTED ENDINGS ...... U JUST NEVER KNOW MY SISTER
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was lovely! I kinda dig makin my own ending cause it alwayz comes out just right.

    Reas
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LIFE'S IDEOLOGICAL CONCEPT ........
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've read this and haven't been able to respond...i wanna say that i like the style of this
     
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