Black Poetry : Long Ride.

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inspiration unknown I seem to just come up with things.


    Dark road
    you and I
    make the long
    trip home.
    The radio plays
    and between the songs
    we talk about any and
    everything
    Conversations change
    from topic to
    topic some innocent
    and some not so innocent.
    During the ride we
    share so much that we
    never planned to reveal
    and we planted
    the seeds to what we can
    will be.
    I try to controll
    the urge to touch you
    in a way other than friendly
    To hold your hand
    rub your thigh kiss
    your lips.
    It seems that the ride
    takes forever and is not
    long enough.
    Next time I think
    I'll take the bus.
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this piece...talkin havin nice conversation,but them feelings is just takin over your brain.The longer you think of the posibilities your mind drifts into that special place....You can tell I've been here before :lol:Lovin this drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This had such a comfortable feel to it, getting to know that special one, very nice calming flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was a ride
    it had the embrace
    and had the too much
    ya but the bus will take forever
    it make too many stops
    this was fun to read flow on poet of the WEEK !!!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    likes
     
  6. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummmmm Rich......:lol::lol: can you read?
     
  7. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umm Rich I am not poet of the week this week thanks anyway


     
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    nice poem. this is how you end up in love...trust me, I know...one :heart:
     
  9. gempis

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    I am diggin the twist on the end, cuz you turned it into a funny.
     
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