Black Poetry : Long Live the King

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  1. Nobleman

    Nobleman New Member MEMBER

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    I've long lived past this day
    When life crumbles under my feet
    So much like ocean waves
    and still I stayed
    to rebuild my castle

    What makes a great king?
    The answer I can not handle.

    One day at a time
    I add solid thoughts
    Line after line
    On my flat energy plane
    Where love is lost
    but hate
    stays a small flame

    I believed my mind would be
    My true sanctuary
    Until...

    My great queen doused my foundation
    With loves kerosene
    Eliminating our possibilities of
    new love and destroying my dreams
    of inner peace

    Thus...

    Taking me back to the beginning of my story

    So be it!

    I've long lived past this day....
     
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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    Thank you for joining and sharing your Nobleness with us :)

    very vivid picture you've painted your Highness
    looking forward to more
    please make yourself at home

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhhhhh!!! WELCOME

    ya Nobleman to the playground of Destee's place
    long live ya flow as u know stay & play as u may
    as I WELCOME U WITHIN DA FAMILY:toast: :D
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    You know......

    You know you stayed to long when your love transforms into hate..........

    Epiphany:heart:
     
  5. James Eta

    James Eta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome

    Nobleman.

    I enjoyed the read. Looking forward to more.

    Peace

    J
     
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