Black Poetry : Long Distance Lovemaking

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Mar 27, 2004.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to kiss your lips until it feels like we're connected
    And I want my fingertips to roam your body until I leave my fingerprints
    I want my tongue to lick places you never knew existed
    And I want to experiment with every position until our bodies are permanently bent

    I want to make you so wet that it feels like you gave birth to an ocean
    And I want to make you so hot until your touch could melt a block of ice
    I desire to pull you so close until it feels like our bodies have become one
    And I want sweat to cover your body until I can see my reflection

    I want to spell my name into you so that everytime you walk your Kat purrs "poeticlyspeakin"
    I desire to take you so high that you visit heaven's heaven
    I need it to taste so sweet that I could make candy out of your juices
    I want to take you somewhere so distant until it feels like we've created a 10th planet

    I want it to hurt so good until it feels like you've died and went to heaven
    I desire for you to claw @ the sheets until... until... there's nothing else to grab
    I want your moans to be so loud that these walls record every oooh, aaah, and yes
    I need to cover every inch of this house until the area, perimeter, and diameter is memorized

    BUT...

    Since you're milez away from me... I guess I have no choice but to seduce you with the tip of my pen.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmmmmmmm!!
    how sweet it is to be loved
    long rangeeeeeeeeeee!!
    flow on dis was hot....
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...i loved this girl...
     
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    whewwwww weeee now this was blazin, really enjoyed
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow
    I like that seduction with the pen.
    Cool line Nice Work
     
  6. Clio_the_Muze

    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really liked this.....

    :lips: That was just a simply delicious piece! How seductive, sultry, and free-flowing it is....

    Thanks for sharing...
     
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    whoa!!

    blazin

    :D
     
  8. twision

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    Yeah...nothing like distance to test the binds of love
    Seems like yall may have what it takes to survive

    Likindaflow




    Peace and Love
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow:)
    loving this scribe
    ah ...wonderful
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  10. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whewww.. sumbody call 911
    Cause Sista Lady Poet is on
    fire :hot: !!!!
    Go head on with
    that hot spicy flow gurl ...

    Much Peace,
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
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