Poetry Critiques : Long distance love letter

asimplepoet

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Somewhere between paradise and diaster
Occupation
Teacher
To my beloved

Knowing you are there for me brightens my day!

The physical space between us is hard to bear.

But i'm confident we are truly built to outlast it all.

Every night I wish I could hold you and kiss you

And make sweet love until we float off to sleep

But we both Know right now that is an impossiblity

So the assurance of our love eases me off to dreamland

Knowing soon I'll be looking in your eyes when I wake

Makes me work harder to handle my daily routine

Because i know in the end it will be me and you

So hold on to our love till we can hold on to each other.

And don't forget that I love you like noone has ever

From your soulmate
 
im glad you hold me close in ya heart
plz boo dont let space tear us apart
i sleep with ya photo pent up in my sheets
its da closest thing to u dat i have with me
u mock my ways but if they had wut we shared
acknowledge not laugh hatin they wouldnt dare
although i stand firm on my own two
i find myself staggerin without you
i miss n yearn fa ya voice n ya soft carress
ya scent da soft voluptuousness of ya breast
as soon as business is done im comin home
no ill be runnin fastr den thoughts in ya dome
so i can shower u with hugs n kisses
jus wanna be layed up wit da mrs:blush:
u miss me now but i miss u more
surprise boo open ya door:welldone:
 

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