Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Gaylee, Aug 10, 2002.
Please slide inside me
Let me hold you forever
Move once to come in
this kind of verse
couldn't come out, if it wasn't inside you from the start!
flow Gaylee! lovin the way you do the haiku!!!
I'm sorry, and I do not claim expertise, but isn't this "senryu"? I'm sure I'm being dopey, but I do love the image, sigh. Thank you Gaylee, as usual your passion glows.
Thank you soo much for your reads. Heartbeat, even the fewest words from you mean so much. Alyce, your words inspire and awe me always so anything you say is "ALL GOOD" for me to hear. Smilin, thank you so much for the education, always.
very sweet flow
sliding inside to move ya
da perfection was felt
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