Black Haiku : Long and Slow

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Gaylee, Aug 10, 2002.

  1. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please slide inside me
    Let me hold you forever
    Move once to come in
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH YES!!!

    BE
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this kind of verse

    couldn't come out, if it wasn't inside you from the start!

    flow Gaylee! :heart: lovin the way you do the haiku!!! :wink:

    a
     
  4. smilin_dwarf

    smilin_dwarf Active Member MEMBER

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    I'm sorry, and I do not claim expertise, but isn't this "senryu"? I'm sure I'm being dopey, but I do love the image, sigh. Thank you Gaylee, as usual your passion glows.
     
  5. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you soo much for your reads. Heartbeat, even the fewest words from you mean so much. Alyce, your words inspire and awe me always so anything you say is "ALL GOOD" for me to hear. Smilin, thank you so much for the education, always.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet flow
    sliding inside to move ya
    da perfection was felt
     
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