Black Poetry : lonelygirl

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  1. soulsinger#1

    soulsinger#1 Member MEMBER

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    another day
    another night
    you find yourself
    still waiting
    for love to come
    to rescue you
    from the drowning sense
    of loneliness
    thats choking you

    if your lonely girl
    i just thought i'd tell you
    love will come and find you
    anywhere you are
    hey there lonely girl
    i'll mention as well
    when it finally comes to find you
    it will never part

    always in the wrong place
    wondering, why the right one
    passed you by
    still searching
    stop searching
    all along the love you needed
    was inside

    it may take long
    but it could be tonight
    when it comes
    it'll be right
    so don't let it
    get the best of you
    got to stay strong
    stand up and fight
    keep movin on
    livin your life
    cause one day
    love is gonna see you through

    if your lonely girl
    i just thought i'd tell you
    love will come and find you
    anywhere you are
    hey there lonely girl
    i'll mention as well
    when it finally comes to find you
    it will never part

    time will tell
    if it's now or then
    keep your doors open
    for when your blessing comes
    and you will see
    what is meant for you
    knowing, it was worth the wait


    if your lonely girl
    i just thought i'd tell you
    love will come and find you
    anywhere you are
    hey there lonely girl
    i'll mention as well
    when it finally comes to find you
    it will never part
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to destee.com....
    likes ya flow hope to read more...
    :wave:
    :angel1:
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaay Brother Soul Singer #1 :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    i was lonely ... till i met you
    now my heart sings of love so true
    smiling as i type these words :love:

    So glad you joined us !!!! Thank you for sharing your poetry!! I'm sure the Family will be feeling you too ... looking forward to more ... much much more!

    Please make yourself at home here, because you are!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwman


    i love this ... i love this i :heart: This i love this i love this.......



    it makes me :spin: i makes me smile again.....just what i needed on a saterday night....going to babysit.......walking over the streets seeing lovers kissing walking close warm in the rain....


    hey soul brotha :welcome: and look at my Poem "Love will come to me"


    this is a sweet Peace of poetry..thank you for it and keepWriting Poet



    Libertylady
     
  5. shUt-Yo-M0uf

    shUt-Yo-M0uf Active Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow....im feelin it
    welcome to destee.​
     
  6. AfroBoricuaRoni

    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so sweet

    this piece was so sweet. i really felt it. a lot man.

    Roni :heart:
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmmmm
    this scribe is so devine
    loving it
    share more :)
    Peace
     
  8. soulsinger#1

    soulsinger#1 Member MEMBER

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    thank you

    i appreciate your appreciation ,understanding and acceptance of the
    truth,being ayoung woman now an days
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    to sweet welcome within da family
    of poetic scribe dis was awesome flowin
    mo mo mo !!! flow on
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really like this - feelin it. welcome to destee!!!! :wave: