Black Poetry : Lonely

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Forgive me if this doesnt make sense, but this is how i currently feel.Hope u all like it.


    Never felt so lonely in my life.
    Having conversations with myself...
    "Self..." But I get no response.
    Not even my own conscious wants to talk to me.
    Now I understand what Akon means.
    "I'm so lonely."
    No one cares, or at least thats the perception I consistently see.
    Why does this have to happen to me?
    I just want some one to talk to.
    I wanna feel alive again.
    Right now I feel..
    Empty
    Numb
    Like a robot
    No existence, just functioning.
    I want to feel..
    Love
    Excitement
    Happiness, etc.
    "I just want to feel safe in my own skin"(dido)



    A Sarcasm Truth Copyright 2007
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Sarcasm4eva

    It makes a great deal of sense sis.
    Always remember, it's quite okay to be loney at times...
    but you are never alone, for you will forever have yourself and you!
    You attract the same ora you give out...
    Inner search is needed first. All else will follow,
    pamper you...and only you right now.
    And your "Self Conversations" will come.
    Hang in there sis!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hold on as change will come and some kind of sense will be revealed
    from it all .....i feel you here
     
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    glad 2 see u back gurl....
    writting these things down...
    help change to occur...
    i see ur point doe...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Made perfect sense to me, your words spoke to that sense of loneliness quite well. Emotively posed.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ... and to add to that, you and the pen seem to communicate very well.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    is a psyche job

    you'll be fine

    it's called finding yourself

    peace

    i know you would rather have peace

    or peaceful people drama/free people around you

    lol

    peace poet
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    are you really from

    NYC?
     
  9. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for all the love and support everyone! I will get through this like everything else in my life :)

    Street So'ja: yea im from nyc. like how u got Nostrand up there.lol
     
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