Black Poetry : lonely with you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Jordansmom, Mar 22, 2006.

  1. Jordansmom

    Jordansmom New Member MEMBER

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    keep thinking time can change
    thoughts rearranged
    only pain stays the same
    wondering what I'm doing
    when your constantly ruining
    all the plans I have for you
    all the energy fored into this
    you don't have a pot to piss
    wondering what I'm doing
    and if time can change
    my thoughts of you
    holding back
    panic attack
    running scared
    no longer aware
    of the love i hold
    just one more time
    say it once more
    one more time
    in an endless stream
    of one mores
    slowly i pull away
    while you push more
    about to break
    free from your hold
    when you are so cold
    rather be alone than
    lonely with you
     
  2. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dam welcome to Destee welcome
    To the place of peace poetry and love
    The haven is open for you
    That was a tight drop poet
    Much Love 2 You
     
  3. Jordansmom

    Jordansmom New Member MEMBER

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    Tantrum, thanks for your response.
    love it when thoughts just flow and my mind can wander long enough to emit my soul
     
  4. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No problem bro
    Welcome again
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was feeling this flow, poet. Flo on.
    One love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great scribe poet !

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the home u just found
    welcome to the house of peace and respect
    welcome from above as i bless this piece some love

    tyte look to read and share more poeticly...peace and welcome Jordansmom
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey im feeling you poet nice work keep up the good work poet.:welldone:
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know this feeling all too well...i like this...
     
  9. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i waz feelin dat, truly that remined me of my bratha, which iz untouched, so flo on with nonstop

    blackluv and bp
     
  10. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Jordansmom,
    Welcome to the right spot...
    I like how you dropped that piece poet...^5
     
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