Black Poetry : Lonely Nights

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lonely Nights


    ****……….

    Why am I thinking about you again?
    It’s like I can’t
    Erases the sweet pleasure of you
    Caressing my lips with yours
    Lifting my shirt off my skin….

    I stare at the ceiling…..

    I can’t compare you
    With anyone else
    Not my first love, for you are unique
    You kiss me with such passion…
    ………. You make me weak

    I close my eyes……

    I can imagine you vibrating off of my body
    Kissing my belly button
    Kissing……every….
    Part……of….me

    :sigh:

    But….you are still…..stuck…
    On…such petty…****….
    You make me ill
    Still…..

    I am so lonely …I want you in my
    ………head…….
    Not yet ready for you to come into….
    ….my bed….

    Maybe one day……
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Swt-T.....hey u took me on a lil' coaster of emotion here
    but I'm feelin the flow of the depicted longing for that one "unique"
    love......this was smooth :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that great one will shine before u in due time
    dis was well felt indeed
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich and sage:)
     
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    now this is my first love...and the first 3 months of our relationship...lol (memories)
    nice flow completely picture everything (kind of felt like a peeping tom ::blush::) anyway loved it j.
     
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    That was a tyte flow. Sometimes I have those same thoughts. Because you know I'm young, right? So, at tymes at my age your mind seems to wonder in those directions but like you said, you're not ready. That was a flamin' hot flow. I was feelin' ever word of it.

    Much love,
    foxy.........
     
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    i like this one sista,
    love,
    -story
     
  8. poloboy

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    Just wanted to show you some love. This poem is nice. The emotions conveyed so well.
     
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    show you some love
    i feel this one
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Mz blkangel:)


    Welcome to Destees Polobuy:) :wave:
     
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