Black Poetry : Lonely Heart

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  1. Desa'rae

    Desa'rae Member MEMBER

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    Is a faded wish
    of a lone figure
    in the early morning
    after last nights rain
    wash away the tears

    Is a wanton kiss
    for a lady love
    dream by a sailor
    who is lost at sea
    yearning for her lips

    Is a lonely poet
    who wakens the spirit
    of love's possibilities
    for the avid reader
    yet can not revive their own

    Is a solo beat
    of a lonely heart
    who has learn to
    mask their pain
    for need of a lover's touch

    desi2000-copywritten
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece....

    I can hear the sound of a light rain, drizzling behind the read of this piece...

    Thanks for sharing it...

    :)
     
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    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you paint
    the lonely heart
    in exquisite color
    all in one
    tearful-n- truthful
     
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    u laid to canvas da heart of lonely souls as da splash of
    dropplets reads beyond da story ......ya pen is up and alive
     
  5. Desa'rae

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    Thank you poets for the read
    if you have experience a lonely heart to write about it is very easy
    it is the waiting in the wings that is hard.


    peace~
     
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