Black Poetry : LONELY EMOTIONAL AFTERMATH

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Horrific moments abid
    like black rain as kids
    stain the streams of vain
    struggling to feed da brain

    Lonely tyme hard to face
    as the pain taken place
    like da aftermath of crowd
    slowly slippin away nightly

    Alone in da chambers of home
    can't escape da silent moan
    of anguished memories strong
    wrongly guesses scream in tone

    A black flood pushing fast
    how long people will this last
    an un song heroic task
    unpleasant reality mask

    Deep emotions reflects in fear
    as thy face drops a salty tear
    denied heart burns in care
    for this loneliness one must bare

    Into da distance flash admist
    harsh reality of da night depressions
    as they resound and surround thee
    stunned , shocked and electricfied

    Images of a burdden lingers as a test
    senselessly da feelings turns cold
    as the joy was taken , stole & bold
    never to disappear like da mold
    as this story of lonely emotion unfold
    from da aftermath...........................


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    this lonely emotional aftermath
    shouldn't have never crossed path
    i know its lonely at the road
    but we cant continue to look for gold
    we have to choose what's right and wrong
    if you don't believe sing one of his song
    let the spirit of it moves ya
    let the word of our Father soothe ya
    cause I know there's gonna be a change
    and when the sun hits it wont be the same
    cause this emotional rollercoaster will be a distant game
    No more of this Lonely Emotional Aftermath
    :love:

    keep spreading the love Rich. love your work always:love:
     
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    This was beautiful Rich:hearts2:
     
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    I like the way it rhymes.
     
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    I was feeling the Aftermath. Man, Poet you got that versatile pen
    doin' it's thang.
    One love
     
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    Thankz Neavr , cursed heart , ibrahim , skrybble7 for the warmth & love
     
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    The feeling of loneliness can be an intense one, and you captured those haunting feelings in this scribe.
     
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    WoW Rich... you put it down once again.
     
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    yes indeed watz it can be a nightmare thankz for the lovin support

    Thank u sonnee01 for the warm wow and love sis...............
     
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    There may come times when you do feel alone...but rest assure you're lonely, for love surrounds you wherever you nest.
    wonderful piece poet ...^5
     
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