Black Poetry : Lonely Dream

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by A007, Apr 6, 2004.

  1. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I close my eyes and travel on imaginary whispers
    and sublime melodies carried by a simple wish
    to surround your essence with radiant warmth
    to expound on supreme sensuality created by your kiss

    I levitate on fantasies of your soft silhouette
    in moonlit horizons we lay in timeless hush
    our spirits embracing our souls creating
    perfect portraits of happiness with eternity's brush

    I swim on silent songs that touch me at my core
    stroking each note as if it were my very last
    dancing on infatuation gliding on sun rays
    holding on to our future and leaving our past

    I envision insatiable scenes in sound sleep
    I've contoured constant cravings into truth
    until I awake all alone wanting to sleep again
    so I will at least have a dream of you.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very nice
    enjoyed the read
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well laid scribe lovin this here flow on wow!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a beautiful, serene read, very nice.
     
  5. LibertyLady

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    007....im totaly blocked out here...


    between the chatting with my friends i do some reading...

    and this one caught me...to

    it does not often happen that someone realy realy toutches me ...
    deep with a poem witch decribed a deep emotional feeling that is inside of me...
    yesterday it happend by a poem of a poet...
    and today again...and i think the day before to..

    i use to do this alot....i think one half and a year ago....
    fall asleep like that ..i use to sleep so fine those days ..
    i was actualy looking forward to go to sleep..
    so i could meet him in my dreams...



    Thanks for bringing those memorys back...


    LoveLibertylady:heart:
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heeeeey Agent

    lol...this was a very nice piece, very deep...
    Thanks for blessin us :)
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome back brotha :) you been missed :)
    this was nice :wave:
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: whoa...this was like :jawdrop: it was beautifully portrayed...
    :heart:
    -story
     
  9. Bluewater

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    loving the flow
    of this scribe
    very nice
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  10. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Everyone

    The encourgement is much appreciated. I have truly missed the fam. I am glad you all liked this. I aspire to write more often. It is a struggle to find the time and a shame that I don't get to express myself more often. Good to be back.

    Heyyyy Nita!!!!!!

    LibertyLady. That was the ultimate compliment. I don't know what to say. Thank you so much. Glad I was able to brighten your day.
     
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