Quiet Poetry Lounge : loneliness

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  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The rain is fallin'.....
    It has kept me up
    I turn on my radio......
    and begin to bundle up
    I get into my "comfort zone".....
    and "light: one up
    My eyes chase the drops......
    that are drippin' against my "dow"
    It is then I remember.......
    everything i miss
    I think about the sadness....
    and tears you have brought "to this"
    Unlike the roses or calls.....
    which i never received
    or the love....
    the love i never got "unconditionally"
    the only thing unconditional
    was the godd*** pain
    all the lies, the sluts
    yet still I maintain
    the things that i allowed
    should of never been accepted
    i compromised myself......
    as well as my essence
    i lowered my self to ********
    WHICH brings me to my past
    the men that were involoved
    and how they never last
    then they wonder why
    i consider them to be "dogs"
    but then i come to realize
    why you had no respect for me at all
    it is simply because of you
    i did not respect ME
    so now i am alone
    ridin' 'round solo
    but just so you know
    i no longer live in sorrow!
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't cry. ladybug. Everything will be alright.
    Sincerity,
    Desert Storm
     
  3. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks but the name of the poem should of been victory
    no more ******** for me, i believe i have had my fair share
    you feel me ;)
     
  4. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks! fo tha words of encouragement
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely the victory is won in the grace of your heart ...keep ya head up sis
     
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    Others may not respect you, some may drag you down with them, if you allow. Respect for yourself, priceless.
     
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