Black Poetry : Loneliness

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [/COLOR]As the wind wonders
    Through this thought of sadness
    I try to find my happiness
    Only to realize
    That to each love story
    There isn’t always a happy end
    See, I look forward to what the future hold
    The joy of children play
    And the laughter of their joy
    Places a smile upon my face
    And the idea of a beautiful woman
    Greeting me with a simple “hello”
    And a gental kiss on the neck
    put my mental state of mind
    Into a better place
    But right now
    Right here
    I have neither one
    And alone by myself
    I hear the melody of a song
    I hear the song of sadness
    Of emptiness
    And of loneliness.
     
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    in tyme loneliness will shift into happiness of a divine love
    well felt piece ........
     
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    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good piece

    Although it's a sad one!Wish u don't feel like that inside bro
     
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    although one may be lonely, its good to have the option of doing things by one self...sometimes when your life gets too crowded you wish you were a yid bit lonely........
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was something I was experiancing at one time. I have learned to be lonely is actually great. No drama
     
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    This was very beautiful...and guess what, you're not alone! :)
     
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    Thanks ma and with you reading my poems I'll never be alone.
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was about how sometimes after a relationship we all feel down at times. I just wanted people to know that we all go through the ups and downs. So keep your head up cause we all been there.
     
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