Black Poetry : Loneliness

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  1. givemefreedom

    givemefreedom Member MEMBER

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    Can you tell me why loneliness is my only and best friend?

    She tells me all about her deepest darkest desires.

    She tells me her secrets,lies and how good she is at being deceitful.

    She tells me how she's afaried to look in the mirror because she knows that the truth is looking back at her.

    She tells me how can't stand the carmel skin the she stand within.

    She tells me how she sits in a crowed room and only the four wall holds a conversation.

    She tells me how she hates when night falls cause she know that alone well be knocking at her back door.

    See alone she doesn't come just to visited noooo she comes to stay awhile.

    She bring along her friend darkness, emptiness and despair.

    Can someone please tell me why Loneliness,emptiness darkness and despair is me?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    TRUELY U

    HOLD WITHIN SELF THE EMOTIONAL FEELIN'
    OF VIBES LEFT UNTOLD ...TAKE A DEEP LOOK
    INSIDE DA MIRROR ......ONLY THERE LAY YA ANSWER
    LONINESS IS A WEAPON U USE AT SELF
    REACH INSIDE YA HEART SEE THE LOVE AND LIVE
    PRAYER IS THE SECRET..........WELCOME ............
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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    such a dark peace ... so solemn ... hmmmmm
    but i like the darkness
    i enjoy my company
    all of us
    sometimes loneliness shows up
    and then sometimes despair peeks her head in
    and yes, sometimes emptiness is there too
    but they are my friends
    we hold hands and talk
    share with each other
    'til happiness, joy and smiles present themselves again
    and they do always come back and join us

    i enjoyed this peace
    thank you for joining us
    please make yourself at home

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Yo

    you can be alone but not lonely because you have to become comfortable with yourself life is not easy to do some stuff make you happy what ever it is cause you have to be happy some how but lonely is all in the mind yes we need friends or such but start enjoying our own company until you can get some real satisfaction in what you are looking for

    keep the faith


    DSSNY
     
  5. MsDLite

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    human situation...

    ...no one likes...
    it is life on hold...
    the mind and heart getting
    cold...

    good friends can fill the
    void...

    ...i end here...
     
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    Ascertain whether you're "alone" or "lonely" There's a hella big difference mos' def.

    Sometimes "alone" is good - it's being "lonely" that's a mo'fo'!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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