Black Poetry : loneliness

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  1. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loneliness can be crucial at times
    thoughts and frustrations play with mymind
    with questions of who I am, what I am, and why
    allowing me to look at myself through my eye
    leaving me in awe, because things dont appear the way they actually are
    so now i must figure out how to get things on track
    and to simply not focus on what i lack
    seems i forgot i have only one life to live
    so from here on out i strive to fulfill
    fulfill my life wit all thats good
    and learn
    how to forget the n-e-g-a-t-i-v-e
     
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    Welcome justbnme03,

    You are not alone here, keep bringing those poems and we'll be there in support of you-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee's poetic playground
    welcome from above
    indeed u well felt ...........keep flowin
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    justbnme03

    You better be you. :D

    This was very nice...great flow.

    Come over to voice chat and read this piece...and others...for us. We'd love to hear it.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
  5. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thxs yall for feedback, i will definetly keep flowin
     
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    nice flow I can relate in so many ways to this beautiful work of art peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice lil piece u got here

    was def feeling it

    keep it up
     
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