Black Poetry : loneliness is my murderer

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im sittin here in my room
    wonderin wat its like to b alone
    denyin dat i don't even kno
    sadened that i left myself get like this
    i shouda
    i coulda
    man, y didnt i
    but its too late
    now im trapped
    stuck
    in between want and need
    trapped alone
    mentally- unable to connect
    huh, my moms says i run folks way
    cuz im so gone
    physically- no connects
    since we moved away
    there aint no one to go outside and play
    emotionally- ?
    no 1 knos xcept me
    and i sure don't to say the least
    everything is so blurry
    cant make out da picture
    my mind keeps pullin and tuggin me here and there
    and my heart keeps sugestin this and that
    [email protected]
    i'm so confused?
    on how i could feel so unused
    by myself
    wats my excuse- y do i feel so alone?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling da emotion flowing here
     
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    Loneliness is such a sad feeling...and you expressed that well in this piece...keep flowing.
     
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    Excellent poem Daroc!
     
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    very nice :toast: continue to grow
     
  6. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks famelee..... loneliness sure was bout to kill me that night if i aint had my pen.....
     
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    Your pen, you will always have, and us too poet....:)
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tanx watz is gladly appreicaited... i kno.. this is my home.. shoot im on here more than i am in the living room..lol
     
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    tight drop
    flow head on.....
     
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    I know what you mean, baby - been there myself lately. I'm glad you had your pen too, both for yourself and the rest of us. Keep ya head up. :heart:
     
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