Black Poetry : loneliness hits the lioness.......

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A book

    a song....

    a particular movie...

    a familiair face...

    a touch of just somebody.....

    a certain smell...

    a colour....

    a soft brieze...

    a picture...

    or a painting.......


    its there.....
    ......................its there again...

    let me be honest about it...

    yes....

    this is one of those moments....
    when loneliness..
    hits the lioness....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i know dis one so well
    but i kept moving to da light
    tyte flow
     
  3. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes i keep moving to the light....

    thank you rich....





    but i,m tired of moving....








    LoveLibertylady:heart:
     
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    i hear ya but like rich says keep moving towards that light
    nice flow here
    thanks for sharing
    peace
    Angel
     
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    Yea, so many things can remind you of what you are missing, reminding you of loneliness. This was posed so well. And you never know what may be around the corner....
     
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    relax sistah upon the glow
    and be carried i feel ya
     
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    relax and absord
    feeling your flow
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    although melancholic...
    a beautiful expression
    ....very nice read
     
  9. MrBlak

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    This is simple, yet gets across how you are feeling in detail. Very nice poem. Its true, things all around can remind one who is struggling in their love life or social life, just how miserable they are.
     
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