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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My love has ventured
    to da very end of this world
    along dead end streets
    of all existance in motal space
    behold a place not many will visit
    and even fewer will ever leave
    through da stale air of sweet hush
    upon da dry silent skies
    I found an angel at the end of her
    slated journey all caged
    inside her isolation
    her comforting in apathy concealing
    between da battered household
    and mixed emotions to be loved
    but within her honey brown skin
    i felt an urgency of embrace calling me
    to escape inside my comfort n' warmth
    within her brown eyez was da gateway
    to her passion wishing i speak
    so tenderly all i could say upon tis angel
    cometh unto me beloved to be loved
    for i will give thee unconditionally me.
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Great capture, Rich...you still know how to make the sistas swoon....
    I like the mixture of idioms, the king's english with the street swagga....you do that so well, im envious.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Big thankz u know we gotta hook up and drop a piece soon !!!!
     
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