Black Poetry : Locked Up(u can't have !@#$)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, Aug 1, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I heard Akon singing this song
    Of how his life turned up side down
    The life turned dead wrong
    A life of crime and broken laws
    Jay Z said it betta,"Talk to the lawd."
    Jesus still walking and blessing
    Hoping these many and few learn a lesson
    But is there a way that you can lock yourself up with no key
    Erase yourself from another's memory?
    Vanishing from their thoughts and eyes that see
    That's what these rappers doing today crap the
    Pollute the radio waves
    With rhymes that have no meaning and crazy ways
    Lil' Flip and T.I. wanna be the king of the southside
    50 cent and Ja Rule want to be the kings up north
    While Cameron mad because Mason done found the Lord
    Beefin' ova dumb ish I can't undastand
    People still willin' to spend a grand
    I'm not dissing all emcees,just wanna bes
    The so called certified gangstas
    Pimpstas
    Coochie Pumpas
    And booty humpas
    Can we get us a real MC
    Take the stand and despense a new quality
    Of unity
    The beats are nice and so is the spice
    Rapping is not a game it's poetry which I hold very dear to me
    That the industry tricks those who dont oppose to buying
    Jadakiss asked us why the rappers be lying
    Until we can get the real hip hop
    These rappers is played out like hop scotch
    And until we get something real
    I'm locking up my purse and keeping my bills :nono:
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    I done lock my purse up to Sis!
    *Smh* Sho your right!!!!!!!!!

    Loving it!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Save the bills for something that strikes you as real. Too bad this can't be memorized by those who just can't see yet. Well written piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was expressed so well.....wow !got my wallet
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight posed well too!!!
    i got my purse..lol shoot
    Peace
     
  6. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: thanx you all for the love

    Rich you can buy a purse man we won't think of you differently......:lol:
     
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    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REPLY TO SENSUALREALITY

    SensualReality, Perhaps you know from “Then them Now us”
    A poem I posted some time ago, that I opine rappers are pus
    Your words are a sea of truth and an ocean drowning them
    Its about time someone with courage chose rappers to condemn

    Great poem you have made
    Now go and seize a great day

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You
     
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