Black Poetry : locked away

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Jul 18, 2001.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    today i realized that i no longer
    love you freely as i once did
    and i put up these walls where doors used
    to be and i feel as if you're distant
    but i'm the one on the bicycle
    there are times when your insistency of
    being difficult overwhelms my understanding
    and i pedal further away
    so because you don't allow me to love you
    the only way i know how
    i've locked you in the recreation room
    i'll let you out when i want to play again
    until then i'll be in the kitchen
    repairing my heart shaped platter...
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U riding a bicycle now girl (LOL)
    Just stop pedlin so damb fast

    Much luv poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    RIDE ON!

    TOO THE O~ZONE OF NEW BEINGS
    LOVE DES ONE...............:D
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you know

    some people should learn treat people the way they want to be treated and if they want to treat people bad then bounce

    WILD7 this situation is not worth you precious time girl

    you can do bad all by your lonesome

    so handle your business and make yourself happy

    cause So'ja can't have you frowning girl you hear me

    so do what makes you happy and if they don't understand well they should have been on their job from the jump

    Peace and start representing that name
    WILDFLOWER7


    <DSS>
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WDF-7

    I'm feelin' all of
    these words
    and they
    speak the
    unspeakable...

    Well thought scribe
    poetess.... Thanks for sharing


    One.
     
  6. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayuum!!

    "...repairing my heart shaped platter"

    very tight piece!!

    *cycles*
     
  7. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm so delighted that this
    peace
    spoke to each of you in a
    different way...
    sometimes i write what i
    don't say....
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss K-ness

    there is much here that escapes the naked eye...and I feel it coming from way down in the depths of your soul.

    I believe most of us write and share openly, what we would not utter, privately. A paradox in many ways; but somehow there's a certain healing.

    thank you for entrusting us with your unspeakable stuff. :)

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    revisit of a beautiful piece
     
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